A visual or narrative tally of what the protagonist "owes" the General. 🛡️ Why It Works
If reading digitally, use a "click to reveal" mechanic for redacted text.
In Bound to the General , the tension hinges on the power imbalance and the high stakes of a military or dystopian setting. A feature that would deepen the reader's immersion and the characters' connection is 🖋️ The Feature: The General’s Ledger
A list of things he has sacrificed, including personal feelings.